correct my writing

[aeadmin]

The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as

many as 29 million vehicles on British roads.

Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws

introduced to control car ownership and use.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

cars became the best trasportation humanity had ever faced . the number of cars increased for more than 29 million

[aeadmin]

Hi Qamar,

Good try on this opening sentence.

Please submit your essays for professional editing by using the “task 1” and “task 2” buttons in your “my student account”.

All the best.

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