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aeadmin
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Hi Clargie,
There are some grammatical errors but overall this is a strong response and should score about 7 on the academic IELTS. Your analysis could be a bit more detailed but the overall cohesion and complexity of your language is quite good. If you would like a more detailed edit, please submit your writing through one of our editing services. It is worth the price.