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IELTS Task 1 Writing
You should spend about 20 minutes on the following task.
The charts below show various reasons for either biking or driving to work. Summarize the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The two pie charts indicate the percentages for five reasons people choose to cycle to their employment or five reasons for driving to work; each of these reasons is clearly outlined in the legend. Immediately, it is clear that there are two dominant reasons for cycling to work as well as for driving.
OVERVIEW
The two pie charts indicate the percentages for five reasons people choose to cycle to their employment or five reasons for driving to work; each of these reasons is clearly outlined in the legend. Immediately, it is clear that there are two dominant reasons for cycling to work as well as for driving.
ANALYSES
Going into more details, about a third of all cyclists indicated health and fitness as the primary for choosing this method of transportation while another third claimed it is for less pollution. On the other hand, the largest proportion of automobile users expressed comfort as their main reason for opting to drive while half as many expressed that it was due to their distance from the workplace at 40% and 21%, respectively. The remaining three reasons people bike to work are shared fairly equally, no parking problems (15%), no-cost (13%), and faster than driving (12%). Similarly, the three remaining factors for driving to work are quite equal-weighted, either have cargo or faster than cycling, both 14%, and safer than cycling at 11%.
SUMMARY
In summary, it is clear that there are quite different reasons for people to either bike or drive to work, and each of these represents a significant percentage of commuters.
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Should I write the introduction and the overview in the same paragraph ? If I do so I’m going to lose marks ?
Nowadays people all from all over the world use various types of transport for different purposes. The most popular ground modes of transport are bicycles and cars. According to the charts that are given to me in the task, I will talk about reasons for cycling to work and reasons of driving to work.
In the first chart 30 percent of the voters indicated that they use bicycle to get to work because of this way help them to be healthy and fit. Moreover, the same number of votes choose bicycle because they do not want to pollute environment by exhaust gases from the car. As for the second chart, the most part of driver- 40 %- use their transport to get to work because this way is the most comfortable for them. Half as many said that the reason of using car for getting to their work is a really big distance from their home to their place of work, about 21%. The others reasons of using car are the fact, that this way is faster than cycling or they have different things that with which neither should be careful (14%).And 11 per cent supposed that driving is safer than cycling. Similarly, the three remaining factors for a trip to work are quite similar in values: no parking problems (15 %), no costs (13%) and quickness (12%).
In conclusion, I would like to say that people have different reasons why they use car or bicycle to get to work. The most significant parameters are comfort, healthy lifestyle and pollution.